Rough cut 1Feedback
After showing our first rough cut to our media class we where presented with a range of strengths and weaknesses
We had a range of shot types but was advised to add a few more close ups. but overall they said our plot was very clear we just plan on editing some scenes and cutting out some scenes(swinging rope)
Our costumes where really good as it showed the dark behaviour of our main character. Also the use of hammers and weird objects as well as use of ropes created enigma.
The weaknesses were that the shots were quite similar and needed some variation and we need to make the burying of the weapons more descriptive, possibly adding fake blood. some people found the scene of digging with the hammer a bit confusing so we plan on using a gardening shovel
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