Feedback:
Good shot types of the scenery and looks and sounds nice in terms of making it look normal and setting the scene. We intend to add an eerie and up tempo sound during the second half to show the transition in the atmosphere, we are also going to add music for when we see her put her headphones in. We are also going to add more foley sounds, for the crunching of the leaves, blowing of the wind and other regular sounds. We need to also add eerie sound effects to create tension.
We need to change the font of our title credits as the font we had chosen is actually used for other uses and wouldn't be usually seen in films. We got feedback that it would make more sense to use a basic font instead. We are going to shorten our establishing shots and lengthen the shots that are more significant. We were told the ending of our sequence was effective as throughout the sequence we follow our main character but the last shot leaves the audience in the forest as she walks a
way. The glasses were the very last shot and the feedback said it shows she left them making the audience question what will happen next and if she gets caught.
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